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Tuesday, December 25, 2012

Lets run and lets not

Running away is so exciting,
from problems, from people
and from the self from time to time,

The adrenalin rush of panic
and fear of being caught unguarded
for some,
of elaborately woven rationalisations for some,
makes the act a lofty mission

Theory scares some, action scares some,
silence scares some, speech scares some,
morning scares some, night scares some,
love scares some, indifference scares some,

Invisible hierarchies cleverly
conditioned by the socialisation process
leaves each craving for a pat on the back
from the highest order and a notion
that the point representing pinnacle
is perfection

we are the perfect points and
we are the lowest rungs,


I am you and you are me
And we are a dialectical whole
in the twilight of opposites










10 comments:

Venky said...

Wow dear, wonderfully put. Of course I am afraid of something or the other in life. I am afraid of risking, I am afraid of losing what i cherish, I am afraid of letting people inside myself, I am afraid of something or the other in life.

I see myself as being the pinnacle of perfection and also being the lowest of rungs! Ultimately its about how aligned I am to different things, within self and with others.

You have captured it all well in the last two paras dear. I love reading it :)

Aparna Kalley said...

I saw you successfully jump out of a pattern recently and am really proud :) Thanks for the appreciation kano :) I love it that you loved it ...

Krishna said...

Sooooooooooooooooooooper Atge...


I am you and you are me
And we are a dialectical whole
in the twilight of opposites...

Wonderrrrrrrrrfullllllluuu...
NINDA LESSUNDI-CHAALA BAAGUNDI...

Love You Atge...:-)

Unknown said...

When you said the fog was clearing, I didn't expect it to be this! The ease with which the language flows made me feel like floating along a creek...wonderful...

Unknown said...

...venky's response is delightful!

Pulakesi said...

Wonderful...........wonderful......last 2 lines....wow.............I am repeatedly reading it from last night!

Unknown said...

excellent sis...awesome poem loving the last one...

Krupa said...

makes me want to examine what scares me

Arpita said...

Very powerful lines :)

Aparna Kalley said...

Thank you all lovely people :)