Running away is so exciting,
from problems, from people
and from the self from time to time,
The adrenalin rush of panic
and fear of being caught unguarded
for some,
of elaborately woven rationalisations for some,
makes the act a lofty mission
Theory scares some, action scares some,
silence scares some, speech scares some,
morning scares some, night scares some,
love scares some, indifference scares some,
Invisible hierarchies cleverly
conditioned by the socialisation process
leaves each craving for a pat on the back
from the highest order and a notion
that the point representing pinnacle
is perfection
we are the perfect points and
we are the lowest rungs,
I am you and you are me
And we are a dialectical whole
in the twilight of opposites
10 comments:
Wow dear, wonderfully put. Of course I am afraid of something or the other in life. I am afraid of risking, I am afraid of losing what i cherish, I am afraid of letting people inside myself, I am afraid of something or the other in life.
I see myself as being the pinnacle of perfection and also being the lowest of rungs! Ultimately its about how aligned I am to different things, within self and with others.
You have captured it all well in the last two paras dear. I love reading it :)
I saw you successfully jump out of a pattern recently and am really proud :) Thanks for the appreciation kano :) I love it that you loved it ...
Sooooooooooooooooooooper Atge...
I am you and you are me
And we are a dialectical whole
in the twilight of opposites...
Wonderrrrrrrrrfullllllluuu...
NINDA LESSUNDI-CHAALA BAAGUNDI...
Love You Atge...:-)
When you said the fog was clearing, I didn't expect it to be this! The ease with which the language flows made me feel like floating along a creek...wonderful...
...venky's response is delightful!
Wonderful...........wonderful......last 2 lines....wow.............I am repeatedly reading it from last night!
excellent sis...awesome poem loving the last one...
makes me want to examine what scares me
Very powerful lines :)
Thank you all lovely people :)
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